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Date: 2011-07-30 01:57 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] luzula
I still love this! And I like the way you fleshed out Carol's part. I actually got tears in my eyes--the place where that happened was

Walking out into the street like this - arm in arm with her husband, like a comrade, under a dozen watchful eyes, Carol feels overwhelmingly alive.

Possibly it was the word "comrade"?
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